很多考生都把重點放在了雅思寫作的邏輯結(jié)構(gòu),華麗地道地表達,充分有力的論據(jù)上,這些確實需要好好重視。這些都是正面的給你寫作加分的地方,但是千萬不要忽略了那些小小的錯誤。很多考生的寫作自我感覺寫得蠻好,有符合西方的邏輯思維,有著豐富的詞匯,但是往往分數(shù)就不能超過6,甚至更低。其實,考生們要意識到,雅思寫作也是個加加減減的過程,你有亮點就加分,你有低級錯誤就減分。所以在加分的同時,千萬不要讓這些減分項目使得自己的加分項目打水漂。
語法對寫作提分具有重要意義,它是雅思寫作四項評分標準之一,在大小作文評分中均占25%,來跟著小編來分析我們常見而又容易忽視的雅思寫作錯誤:
1. 主語部分常見錯誤
1.1動詞不能充當句子主語,你腦袋是知道,你的手就是不知道呀
來看例子哈!
Take maternity leave is good for women’s health.
翻譯:休產(chǎn)假對女性的健康有好處。
解析:語中句子的主語通常由名詞或者具備名詞性質(zhì)的短語,詞語或者從句充當。而這個句子中take 是一個動詞,不能充當句子的主語。
修改:Taking maternity leave is good for women’s health.
1.2句子不能充當主語
Environmental pollution becomes increasingly serious is an undeniable fact.
解析: environmental pollution becomes increasingly serious是一個句子,而且這里沒有任何引導詞,比如that這種,不能充當整個句子的主語成分,可以用以下兩種改法:
修改:
a. It is an undeniable fact that environmental pollution becomes increasingly serious. (語法現(xiàn)象:It做形式主語,結(jié)構(gòu):It is +名詞+that)
b. That environmental pollution becomes increasingly serious is an undeniable fact.(語法現(xiàn)象:that引導主語從句)
翻譯:環(huán)境污染變得越來越嚴重是一個不可否認的事實。
2. 謂語常見的語法錯誤
2.1 主謂一致問題
例句:To be an irreplaceable employee require people to upgrade skills constantly.
解析:不定式做主語,謂語動詞要用單數(shù)形式。
修改:To be an irreplaceable employee requires people to upgrade skills constantly.
翻譯:要成為一個不可替代的員工需要不斷地更新技能。
2. 2 There be 句型
例句:There are many people suffer from poverty in the world.
解析:這里出現(xiàn)了兩個謂語,一個是there be句型中be是謂語動詞,
一個是suffer,因為一個句子在沒有連詞的情況下是不能有兩個動詞的,suffer只能以非謂語的形式出現(xiàn)。
修改:There are many people suffering from poverty in the world.
翻譯:世界上有很多人遭受貧困。
2.3 主句缺謂語動詞
例句:A current report about a 14-year-old boy who was forced to clean streets because of destroying his school seriously which irritates an argument.
解析:這個句子讀起來真的好吃力,還有種頭重腳輕的感覺,因為的主句里面包含了一個who 引導定語從句(a 14-year-old boy who was forced to clean streets because of destroying his school seriously),was是定語從句里的謂語動詞。整個句子的主干即主句應(yīng)該是A current report irritates an argument.其中irritates應(yīng)該是主句的謂語動詞,因此去掉原句中的which.
還有解決頭重腳輕的問題,因此修改為:
修改:A current report is about a 14-year-old boy who was forced to clean streets because of destroying his school seriously, which irritates an argument.
翻譯:最近一個關(guān)于14歲男孩因為嚴重毀壞學校而被強迫清掃街道的報告引起了爭議。
3. 連詞引導狀語從句,化復雜為簡單
例句: Shopping centers are increasingly enjoying less popularity. Because people are now used to shopping on line which is considered to be more convenient.
解析:because, while, although, when, if 引導狀語從句時,必須連接兩個獨立的句子,從句需依附于主句存在,因此將because前面的句號改成逗號。
修改:Shopping centers are increasingly enjoying less popularity, because people are now used to shopping on line which is considered to be more convenient.
翻譯:購物中心越來越不受青睞,因為人們習慣了更加方便的網(wǎng)購。
4. 固定搭配,你需要知記
4.1 不定式符號to 與介詞to的辨別問題
例句: When it comes to boost economy, many developed countries reach goals at the expense of environment.
解析:when it comes to 中to 是介詞,而非不定式符號,因此后面需改成ing分詞形式。類似的固定搭配有:adjust to適應(yīng),attend to處理;照料, belong to屬于, refer to參考;指的是…;涉及,contribute to 有助于,促成,stick to堅持,繼續(xù),等等,考生平時需多積累這類固定搭配并熟記。
修改:When it comes to boosting economy, many developed countries reach goals at the expense of environment.
翻譯:當談?wù)摰酵苿咏?jīng)濟發(fā)展,許多發(fā)達國家以犧牲環(huán)境為代價來實現(xiàn)目標。
5. 逗號不能連接兩個句子
例句:Computers make our life more colorful, this is witnessed by everyone.
解析:在英語中,逗號不能連接兩個句子,可以用以下方法修改:
修改:
a. Computers make our life more colorful. This is witnessed by everyone.
b. Computers make our life more colorful, and this is witnessed by everyone.
c. Computers make our life more colorful, which is witnessed by everyone.
翻譯:所有人見證了,電腦使我們的生活更精彩。
其實,雅思寫作中所運用的語法知識基本都是中學所學的那些語法內(nèi)容,不管你的語言基礎(chǔ)有多強或是相對薄弱,都建議先對這些基礎(chǔ)語法內(nèi)容進行系統(tǒng)的復習并且通過多練筆的形式來加強鞏固,然后最好找英語基礎(chǔ)好的朋友或者專業(yè)老師批改,這樣可以在考前及時查漏補缺,從而提高雅思寫作整體分數(shù)。